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2013年山东高考英语作文题目:给美国朋友Tom的回信

  2013年山东高考英语题目:给美国朋友Tom的回信

  第二节:写作(满分30分)

  假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:

  1. 未及时回复的原因;

  2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

  注意: 1. 次数:120~150;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【试题点评】

  今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书固原癫痫病医院哪家好癫痫信题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。

  【经典套路】

  第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的

  第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)

  第三段:“假期安排”部分

  第四段:补充说明+客套话

  【高分范文】吉林哪个医院癫痫病治的好p>

  Dear Tom,

  How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)

  How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, whi郑州治疗癫痫病医院哪家比较好ch is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

  By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) A山西什么医院治疗癫痫病较好dditionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

  These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)

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